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2021年考研英语二作文解析(武汉新东方)

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Part B

Write an essay based on the chart below.

In your writing, you should

(1) interpret the chart, and

(2) give your co妹妹ents

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

【参考范文】

Whatisclearly illustrated by the bar chart is the information with regardto residents’ way of doing exercises in a certain city. To be specific, theproportion of people doing exercises alone ranks first, up to 54.3%, followedshortly by doing exercises with friends, with a percentage of 47.7%. Incomparison, that of people who choose


to do it with their family-members andwith stable teams are relatively small, accounting for 23.9% and 15.8%respectively.

The phenomenon is justified on the grounds that follow. Above all, onaccount of the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce inall walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals. Thus, it isurgent for people to find a way to relieve their stress while doing


exercisesalone can give them a good opportunity to release their pressure freely.Moreover, people in modern society have gained a greater awareness of expandingtheir social network and broadening their horizon. Under such circumstances,doing exercises with friends naturally becomes a good approach of reaching theirgoals, including making more friends and acquiring more information to help themwith their life and work.

Admittedly, no matter which way people choose to do exercises, they willgain a lot from it. Yet, there are still a large number of people who have notcome to realize the importance of physical exercises although sub-health isco妹妹on among modern society. Therefore, it is my suggestion that the publicmedia should enhance the publicity of the necessity of doing physical exercisesso as to improve the physical condition of all citizens.

【解析】

2021年用柱状图来表达住民体育熬炼方法的比例,与英语二2013年高文文大学生兼职比例的情势雷同,为认识的考查情势。第一段主题句揭穿图表话题,重点难点在图表题目的翻译,此中“某市住民”在2016年高文文题目中有呈现,“熬炼方法”也为简略辞汇,难度较小。须注重的是,该图虽为柱状图,但无尚升降低的变革,是以按静态图方法来描写,细节描写可举行必定的排序,“独自熬炼”及“与朋侪一块儿”占比力大,先分级描写,“家人”“团队”较少,可一块儿描写。第二段,重要阐发图表示象的成因,重要探究占比力大的两种熬炼方法。可从压力和小我意识两个方面举行开展。第三段,评论加建议,必定分歧的熬炼方法皆有益处,但仍有不少人不器重,是以给出建议,媒体加大对体育熬炼需要性的鼓吹,以晋升全民的身体本质。

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