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dear john,
i am glad that you and i are to be roommates这句表达有点新鲜哈,改为i'm glad/delighted to be your roomate during my overseas study and i cannot wait to meet you! before my moving there, i consider it a must to have a basic understanding of each other's living habits.
as a typical chinese, i observe traditional chinese living habits. for example, i go to bed and get up early; i am used to keeping my room tidy. by the way, i love chinese dishes and cooking them at home. i beg your tolerance for the occasional noise and smell of cooking. there must be some living rules in your hometown. would you please explain them to me and offer some advice? i am looking forward to your reply.这三句可以另起一段作为结束。
yours,
li ming
hello guys你写信的目标是一自个噢,hello guys合适多自个打招待,而且用在函件中不太适合,my thanks 这句话不太无缺,这句话的骨干有些my thanks to you “对你的谢谢”不是一个无缺的语句呀,这只是一个名词。后边 for taking precious time to read this email 是for引导的缘由状语。主张你批改为i'm writing to express my thanks to ...这样语句就无缺了 to you for taking precious time readto do不定式,read改为to read this email.as one who is a overseas元音音素最初的单词前用an student,i would like to go to your school studying我想去你们学校学习,这儿标明还没有去,即将去用to do 不定式。studying 改为to study several years表时刻段,这个时刻段前需要介词for . i am writing this email genuinely to express my situation.
most momentous of all,there are some 介词of别忘了,some of my habitsmy important habits that i don't know whetherwhether标明“是不是”,“我不晓得我是不是可以习气...”whether i can adapt to... adapt the foreign school固定分配,习气adapt to,介词缺失 .what diligent这儿是what引导的主语从句,what is diligent 是主语从句 is 不要忘掉了 is that i can't stop running on the playground every morning. meanwhile,i am so ambitious that i am willing to read books in our classroom.in addition,if you were me, you should adapt to living new life.please tell me some advice.这句写得不可好噢,言语比照生硬。你期望对方可以给你供给一些主张可以说:i would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you could give me some practical living skills in your country.或许since this is my first time abroad,i don't know the living habits of your country. if you feel uncomfortable, please communicate with me.
i hope you will take my problems and situations into serious consideration.best wishes for you! i bless you that everyevery标明“每个”,这儿改为everything 标明祝你万事顺意 goes well!
yours truly,
li ming
an,well-kept environment。2.反身代词的的用法还不太了解,这儿大约是keep myself clean3. 假定这儿要用which ,就不必because了,并排句和从句需要再想一想噢。这句可以改成:compared with a dirty environment ,a clean,well-kept environment is my preference, because it enables me to have a good mood all day.;用神态动词的时分需要思考一下是有必要的吗,假定没有必要则不加。)finally, it would be greatly appreciated if you could share some advice about living there with me.
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